The Direct Response Ad That Sells The
Health Benefits Of A Sneaker…

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It’s not a sneaker… It’s a prescription
for better health…

Every company that makes a product has to decide how to market that product. It can be as basic as, “Our product is the cheapest one on the market.” And they market the product to everyone. Or…

You can give your product very specific benefits, not found in the competition. And instead of marketing it to the masses, you can tightly focus on a specific target market.

When you do that, you eliminate much of your competition. And can often sell your product at a premium price. And that’s exactly the path The Gravity Defyer sneaker takes…

Various versions of this ad have been running in lots of different publications lately. At the bottom of this post, you’ll see two other versions of the ad. All similar, but different.

…This ad, for the Gravity Defyer sneaker, isn’t really selling a sneaker. It’s selling the health BENEFITS of what the sneaker does. Heck, it reads more like a pharmaceutical ad than a typical shoe ad.

And that’s something most makers of products have a hard time doing. They assume, just because they make a common product (like a sneaker, or wallet, or glove, etc.) that’s what it should be sold as. And that’s great, as long as you have a hundred million dollar advertising and marketing budget.

But, if your product has a unique benefit, like this sneaker does, then you differentiate yourself from the competition. And you focus in on a very specific target market. A Market that is often willing to pay more for your product over the competition.

With the Gravity Defyer, everyone who has trouble walking, pain in their feet, or wants to walk faster and easier, will want this shoe, over the competition.

And it all starts with the headline. It has nothing to do with performance, or fashion. It focuses on the health benefit…

Imagine living Pain free…Imagine feeling younger and being filled with energy.

If it wasn’t for the photo of the sneaker, this could be an ad for testosterone or some other miracle drug or cream.

Underneath the headline there’s a list of specific benefits of this shoe. And then a great piece of “proof: “Over 500,0000 sold World-Wide.” This is important…

Most people probably never heard of this shoe. But if it’s already sold 500,000, it’s got to be legit. And notice, it says “500,000” not “500,000 pairs.” I’m betting they sold 250,000 pairs of shoes. But 500,000 sure sounds more impressive.

That’s a clever way to present your sales. Keep this in mind when you’re promoting the number of items you’ve sold. Is there a more impressive way to present the numbers?

Then we have a massive photo/illustration of the shoe. And since the inner workings of this shoe are some important, there’s an illustration of the hidden springs. This does two things:

1) It makes the graphic much more interesting. It’s not just your
typical sneaker shot.

2) It shows there’s more to this shoe than the eye can see.
Makes the sneaker look more high-tech.

And there are callouts all around the image, giving specifics of what’s in the shoe. This is the one part of the ad I thought could be stronger. These callouts aren’t too benefit-oriented. And a bit too technical.

For example, instead of saying “AVS3 Ventilation System” (what the heck is that?) They could have written something like “Patent pending AVS3 Ventilation System let’s feet breath 3x MORE than any other brand.” Or “No-sweat ventilation system, let’s feet breathe naturally.”

And what do “Secure heal counters” do? I don’t know. And neither does anyone reading the ad. They should have worded with a strong, easy to understand benefit.

There are two more illustrations on the left side of the ad. You see, the function (as opposed to the fashion or brand name) of this shoe is important. The ad needs to get the point across how this shoe works to give the user better performance.

And each illustration has a benefit-driven caption underneath it. “Eliminate pain” and “Reduce fatigue.” Two very specific health benefits anyone who has pain while walking wants to see.

Also notice that each illustration shows the shoe in “movement” as opposed to a static illustration. In addition to being more eye-catching, these illustrations give some idea as to the performance of the shoe.

If you’re thinking to yourself, “Wow, that’s an awful lot of work and time and effort that went into these illustrations…” You’re right. But this attention to detail is why ads for this shoe are running in national magazines, and your ads are not.

Almost everyone takes the easy way out. Sure, one illustration or one fancy photo is easier to do. But if you really want to sell your products, you need to give as many details as possible in the space allotted. Remember this vital point whenever you create an ad…

Not everyone will read your ad or care about the details. ONLY BUYERS READ EVERY WORD. So give your potential buyers the information they need to make the purchase.

Now we get to the bottom part of the ad and the subhead, which plays off the headline. Remember, when you state something in your headline, make sure to follow-up on it in your copy.

And underneath the subhead are more great benefits. But notice, they’re asked as a question. But the answer to these questions is almost definitely a “Yes.” Seriously… if you’ve read all the way to this point of the ad, it means you do want to walk faster and without pain.

Some marketers and writers don’t like asking questions in their advertising. However, if your strategic about it and know your audience, and ask the right kind of questions, they are very effective in getting the reader to nod yes and go along with your sale’s pitch.

And look what we have here…

Gravity Defyer Banned from Athletic Competition?

This is very similar to the strategy used in the fishing lure ad and the golf ad. It hints this shoe’s (fishing lure, golf club) performance is so superior to the competition, it gives you such an unfair advantage, it may be banned.

Of course, it doesn’t come out and claim it will be banned. It hints, in the form of a question, it “may” be banned. Big difference. Of course, there’s never been any talk of this shoe really being banned. If there was, you can bet they would have told you the specifics in the ad.

The ad goes on to talk about the “VersoShockTM Reverse Trampoline sole.” This is a term the shoe company invented to make its technology look special. No other shoe company can claim this because, until the Gravity Defyer made it up, it didn’t exist!

So now, instead of competing with other performance shoes, they have leapfrogged past them. No other shoe can claim they have this revolutionary trampoline sole.

Underneath the first column is the Gravity Defyer customer Survey Results. This impressive looking chart shows how happy and satisfied many of the users of this shoe are.

The ad goes on to focus on all the pain relief and help you’ll get with this shoe. They really do a great job of positioning it as a cure-all for whatever ails you.

And for good measure, they have a quote from a doctor. Not only does the doctor recommend the shoe, he wears them himself.

Competing manufacturers of similar shoes will have a tough time positioning themselves as the ultimate pain-relief shoe when compared to this one.

Finally, there’s the offer and ordering instructions. I just want to point out one thing. Since this is a direct response ad, there needs to be a way to track it.

You see, this ad (and versions of it) has been running in tons of publications. So you need a way to figure out which ad is getting the most calls, so you can determine which ad is the best. In this case, they provide a “Promotional Code.” So when you call in your order (or order online) this specific code is unique to this ad. It’s a simple way to track your advertising so you know what’s working best.

So, how can you use what you just learned to sell your product?

1) Before you even pick up a pen to write, determine who your
target market is and how you’re going to position your product.
In this case, the advertise is targeting people with pain
when they walk.

2) When you’ve decided how you’re going to position your product,
don’t hold back. Go full force. Don’t worry about everyone outside
of your target market. Your product isn’t for them. Focus only on
your market and what they want.

3) If there are unique aspects to your product, how can you best show
them visually? If you need multiple photos and/or illustrations,
create them. And pay attention to detail.

4) When you use a photo or illustration, use a caption under it
or next to it.

5) If you have impressive statistics, can you show these statistics
in an interesting graph or display? Not only does this make
the stats easier to read, it looks more impressive and official.

6) Do you have a testimonial from an expert in the field? Can you
use his or her photo along with an endorsement or quote?

7) How will you determine if the ad is working? Make sure you have
a tracking mechanism in place. It can be a unique phone number
for each ad, or a tracking code.

OK, another ad reviewed. What do you think? Oh, and here are two other versions of the same ad…

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The Direct Response Ad
That Guarantees To Put You To Sleep…

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my pillow 159x300 The Direct Response Ad <br /> That Guarantees To Put You To Sleep...Sleeping All The Way To The Bank…

Yup, an ad in the New York Times for a pillow. This direct response ad has been running in the Sunday edition of the Times for a few months now. And ads in the New York TImes aren't cheap. So obviously, it's working. 

One thing I hear a lot from business people is, "But I'm selling the same thing eveyrone else is selling. I can only compete on offering it cheaper."

This ad is a perfect example of how to take a relatively mundane product…make it seem special…and sell it at a premium price. The Standard MyPillow sells for $79.95. 

Not only that, but he's taken something most people typically have to see and feel before they buy… and this ad convinces them to buy it sight unseen. Pretty impressive.

It reminds me of David Oreck who sold his vacuum cleaners through the mail with radio commercials. When he first came up with the idea to advertise a vacuum on the radio, people thought he was nuts.

Just because people are accustomed to going to a store to buy certain products, doesn't mean you can't get them to change their buying patterns. All it takes is smart marketing and a strong appeal. 

OK, let's see what makes the MyPillow ad such a great direct response ad…

Last week, when I reviewed the fishing lure ad, I mentioned if you have a strong guarantee, you might want to use it in the headline or subhead. Well, lookie here…

Guaranteed the Most Comfortable Pillow You'll Ever Own!

Now even though the ad starts with a guarantee… it's a weak guarantee. It's too vague. The secret to a GREAT guarantee is to make it as specific as possible. For example, The Benjamin Hotel in New York City has this sleep guarantee:

"…We guarantee you’ll sleep just as well at The Benjamin as
you do at home, or we will give you a free night’s stay."

Now that's a guarantee with some teeth. It backs up the talk with an offer of a free night's stay.

The MyPillow guarantee can be beefed up by saying something like:

Guaranteed the Most Comfortable Pillow You'll Ever Own!  
If Not, Simply Return It And Get Your Money Back…
PLUS We'll Buy You The Pillow Of Your Choice!

But, since this ad has been running in the Sunday New York Times nonstop for a few months now, the headline and guarantee are obviously working.

If you're having trouble sleeping, or if you just hate your current pillow, this headline will catch your eye.

And it's hard to miss the photo of the inventor of the MyPillow. It's cute picture. And while cute usually doesn't work in direct marketing… the dude just looks so happy with his pillow, it works in this case. We should all love our pillows this much.

And speaking of the photo… normally when you use a photo of a product, you want to show the product in use. However, In this case, showing someone sleeping on a pillow probably wouldn't be eye-catching. So to jazz it up, he puts himself in the photo, gently clutching the pillow. We should all be this happy with out pillows.

The photo also works because the copy starts with his personal story. He introduces himself as the Inventor of the pillow. And then tells his little story of how frustrated he was with other pillows. He even educates the reader about how typical pillows are designed to break down over time. There's a little lesson in the ad.

He goes on the list the typical issues most people have with pillows. It's easy for anyone to quickly identify with what Michael is talking about. After he lists the issues with most pillows, he then gives a solution and sows how his pillow overcomes all these issues. This is a classic approach in direct response advertising: Describe the problem and show how your product solves it. It's a simple formula to follow.

And the ad is very personal. It's about HIS story and HIS quest for the best, most comfortable pillow. If you're in need of a good night's sleep, you'll admire his passion and commitment to creating the ultimate pillow. You're thinking something like: "Damn, this guy's some sort of sleep uber-geek. He's spent so much of his life on this pillow, it must be good." And then you get your credit card out and buy the damn thing.

See, lots of companies offer pillows. Lots of pillow manufacturers claim to have superior products. But Michael gets personal. Shows you a real human is behind this pillow, not a faceless corporation. And that's a major factor in making this ad a winner.

If you sell a run-of-the-mill consumer product, is there a story to tell, either about you or the product, that makes it so different and superior to the competition? What details are you leaving out of your current advertising. The MyPillow ad crams in everything from telling you is a member of the Better business Bureau, it's product is made in the USA and that he's sold hundreds of thousands of them (social proof). You never know what specific detail will connect with a consumer, so make sure you include as many facts and fascinations about your product as possible.

Check out the MyPilow web site at: www.MyPillow.com.

 

The $14,615 Exercise Bike Sold Through Mail

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ROM Ad1 The $14,615 Exercise Bike Sold Through Mail
Would you buy the world's most expensive 
(and weirdest looking) exercise bike?

I’m going to start the ad review with one of the all-time great direct response lead generation ads.

Take one look at this exercise bike (called the ROM, which stands for Range of Motion).

You know there’s no way in the world this friggn’ time-machine looking contraption can possibly do what it claims.

It looks ridiculous…impractical… intimidating…and complicated.

And it costs a whopping $14,615.

And then there’s the outrageous claim,

“Exercise in only 4 minutes.”

Four minutes! “Yeah right,” blasts the voice in your head.

Common sense and logic dictate you shouldn't even take a second look at this ad. Yet…

…Versions of this ad have been running in magazines (including Robb Report, Forbes, Fortune, etc.) for years. 

Obviously, it’s getting customers to buy.

And any ad that can sell this device–is a great ad.

There are a ton of powerful marketing lessons to learn here.

But first…

 

…Let's make sure we're all on the same page as to exactly what this ad does.

This is a Lead Generation ad. Its sole purpose is to capture a person's name and address so the ROM company can send more information about this bike to the prospect.

In other words, the ROM company doesn't expect to actually sell the bike form this ad. They just want the opportunity to continue the sales process.

This ad is the first step in a 2-step campaign.

Step two will be more information about the product. In this case, ROM sends out a DVD to everyone who responds to the ad.

You see, when you're selling an expensive or complex product or service, where a prospect may have lots of questions and needs lots of facts to make a buying decision, there's no way you can write everything you need to in a small ad. Instead, what you could do, is…

Create an intriguing ad to capture a prospect's attention and give enough information to get the reader to provide a name and address (and sometimes phone number).

Your goal in a lead generation ad is to get the reader to request more information about the product/service.

By using a two-step sales process, you capture a qualified lead (only people truly interested in ordering this bike are going to request more information).

And you get the opportunity to deliver a great sales pitch in their follow-up information you send out.

OK, now that you know the basics about lead generation ads and a simple two-step sales process… let's look at what makes this ad so great at generating leads for an outrageous (and outrageously priced) exercise bike…

First…the headline. It's outrageous. It makes you stop dead in your tracks.

"Exercise in only 4 minutes?"

Really? Is it possible? Can this finally be the exercise that will help me lose weight? 

Instinctively, you know it takes longer than 4 minutes to lose weight.

Yet, the bold headline combined with the photo of the exercise machine (similar to other exercise bikes, yet very different looking… different enough to get your attention) makes you read on.

Then, right underneath the headline, is the subhead…

"Winner of the Popular Science Award for
the 'Best of What's New' in Leisure Products."

This is an important line because it adds instant credibility to the product. After all, it can't be a total scam if it won a Popular Science Award. But here's the thing…

I have no clue what the heck the Popular Science Award is… and neither does anyone else reading the ad.

It can be a legit organization that thoroughly tested the bike, or some tiny little operation with absolutely no credibility. The fact that the ROM won the award is all that matters right now.

When someone's reading an ad like this, they won't question it too much. Remember, this ad is not trying to get someone to pull out a credit card and buy the bike. So, at this point, a reader won't be too critical of all the claims.

The ad also uses the "Best of What's New" indicia to help sell home the point the ROM won an award. Makes the award (and the ad) look a bit more official.

It's also a nice little eye-catcher. Just enough to catch someone's attention as they flip through a magazine. And, of course, the other item that catches EVERYONE'S attention is…

…The $14,615 price tag. Normally, you don't put a price on a lead generation ad. But ROM does include the price for two very good reasons:

1)  The high price immediately sets the ROM apart
      from all other
 exercise bikes. Obviously, at this price,
      the ROM is the top of the  line. It's exclusively for
      those who only want the best. 

2)  The high price eliminates all the tire kickers who
      can't afford the bike. ROM doesn't want to waste time
      sending out DVDs or
 talking with anyone who doesn’t
      have the money to buy the bike. So,
 only qualified
      buyers are going to request for more information.

So, the very top of the ad has four separate elements…

      Eye-catching headline

     • Subhead that lends credibility

     • Official-looking indicia

     • Extremely high price

These four elements quickly let the reader of the ad know this bike is different and exclusive.

Those readers who are truly interested in owning such a bike, will continue reading. And the first thing they'll see is the photo of the exercise bike. It looks different than any other exercise bike. And you begin to think, "Hmm… maybe it's worth the money…"

Immediately underneath the photo of the bike, you see

"MANUFACTURED IN CALIFORNIA SINCE 1990."

I'm not sure how important this is anymore. Maybe when they first started running these ads, "Made in the USA" was popular, and they tried to capitalize on that sentiment. But today, not sure it adds to the sales argument.

I would put a much stronger line, possibly stating a benefit of owning and using the bike. According to the website, the ROM has been tested and reviewed in quite a few medical journals.

It would be easy to use a caption like "Six published health studies PROVE the ROM reduces body fat and increase cardio endurance in only 4 minutes a day!" Or something like that.

Or, if you want the caption to build on the social proof and popularity of the ROM, you can say something like "As seen in Esquire Magazine, L.A. business Journal, Vanity Fair, Fortune, Newsmax, Outside, Time, Vogue, and Popular Science."

As you can see, even before we get to the actually copy for the ad, there's a TON of selling going on. As for the copy…

…It starts with some impressive facts and statistics about lack of time and exercise. Many people reading the ad can probably identify with not using the exercise equipment they own or missing sessions at the gym.

So, right off the bat, the reader can start nodding in agreement with what the ad is saying.

And then a really good stat and proof of the value of the ROM,

"Over 97% of people who rent our ROM for 30 days wind up
purchasing it based upon the health benefits
experienced during that tryout."

This is a STRONG line for many reasons…

First, no way in the world would 97% of people plunk down $14,615 for something that doesn't work.

Since these people tried it out for 30 days, it "proves" it works. After all, who better to convince you the ROM works than people who were in your shoes and tried it before they bought it?

And, the reason they bought it is: "the health benefits experienced."

This takes out any guesswork a reader may have. NEVER assume the reader of your advertising knows what you're talking about.

And never miss an opportunity to remind them of the benefits of your product. This one line in the ad does both in a subtle, but convincing, way.

Another great line in the ad is:

"At under 20 cents per use, the 4 minute ROM exercise is
the least expensive full body complete exercise a person can do."

WHEW! That line is PACKED with benefits. And it also addresses the cost issue.

You see, anybody who buys this bike, is likely to buy it because he or she is the type of person who wants the best in class. They buy expensive cars, expensive clothing and expensive homes. Emotionally, they WANT the nice and expensive stuff.

However, they justify these expensive purchases (no matter how outrageous they are) with rational facts. So now, they can justify the outrageous price tag by saying, "But look what a smart and prudent purchase this is. It only costs 20 cents per use."

You and I know this line of reasoning is a crock. But it gives the purchaser something to ease the rational side of their mind (and give them amo to use when their spouse sees the credit card statement).

So, when you're selling, always appeal to someone's emotions first… but make sure to include rational reasons someone needs your product or service.

The ad also goes on to continue using very specific facts and numbers on who buys the ROM and how durable and dependable it is.

And the ad ends by telling the reader all the maladies the ROM can help cure, from blood sugar imbalance to bad backs and shoulders. Is there anything this wonder machine can't fix?

And finally, probably the most brilliant copy and sales strategy in the ad is the box on the lower right hand side:

"The typical ROM purchaser goes through several stages"

This lets the reader know he's not alone in thinking what he or she is thinking. Many others before them have gone through the same emotions and indecision as to whether to pursue purchasing the ROM.

And it lets the reader know the ROM company understands exactly what they're feeling and that they deal with this all the time.

In fact, they’re normal in thinking this way. That’s what a BUYER of the ROM should think.

And the best point of the ten is the first one,

"Total disbelief that the ROM can do all this in only 4 minutes."

Many advertisers would shy away from the claim of incredible health benefits in only 4 minutes. But the ROM company addresses it head on. They're not only admitting their claim is unbelievable. They're telling you, you should question the claim as well! 

This is a brilliant strategy as it lets the reader know he or she is not alone. And, at the same time, it gives the ROM company the opportunity to prove their case.

And the second point, builds on the first, and let's you know, everyone around you is going to think you’re nuts for even considering buying the ROM.

In fact, they flat out tell you, "Be prepared to be ridiculed when you buy this bike." Again, this puts the reader (and potential buyer) at ease letting them know, "Hey, it's OK, everyone of our smart buyers goes through this. It's typical."

But, as the list goes on, it slowly convinces you that the ROM is worth the money and is the miracle exercise machine it claims to be.

You see, the first few bullets get you to agree with them on the obvious stuff. That is, this bike is weird and I'll be laughed at. That's easy for a read to buy into and agree with.

However, beginning with bullet number three, the list begins to get more positive toward the ROM. It actually tells you how you will feel. It's easy for the reader to keep agreeing with these points. This list makes it easy for the reader to visualize how great they'll look by using the ROM.

And bullet number 10 will probably put a smile on your face as it tells you the same people who ridiculed you will eventually buy the bike too, after they see how happy you are with it.

And the ad gives you two different ways to order your free DVD. It also lists a physical address (assumingly, the company headquarters. By including a real address, the company appears more real.

Also, the ad lets you know you can rent the ROM for 30 days. This is a great strategy, as it lets you know you don't have to commit to buying it. You can try before you buy.

So now, instead of thinking, "I have to shell out over $14,000 to try this," it gets you thinking, "Hmmm…I can rent it for a little while. That will be cheaper and safer than buying."

There's a reason this ad has been running for many years. It works. It gets people to request the free CD. And a portion of those who request the CD, will purchase the bike.

I actually remember the very first time I saw this ad. I was very young. Had no interest in buying any exercise bike, but read every word of it. It's a masterful job of sales persuasion.

OK, so, how can you use what you just learned form this review in YOUR advertising? Let's see…

First of all, if you have  a product or service that is
totally unlike your competitors, think about making
that one of the major selling features. Just like the ROM
does, come out and tell people, "Of course this looks
different.  That's because, in order to get the 
amazing results above and beyond everything
else offered, we had to make it different. If we
made it look like everything else,  it would 
perform like everything else. But we made
a major breakthrough."

 

Second, Don't be afraid to tell people something negative
about your product or service. The ROM does this by letting
the reader know they'll be ridiculed by others. By admitting
a weakness or flaw in your product or service, it gives you
the opportunity to address it and turn it into a positive.
People aren't idiots. If there's a flaw in your product or 
service, they'll sniff it out. Especially those serious about
buying. Buyers are the ones that read every word of your ad.
Buyers will question every claim you make. And buyers will
see what you're leaving out. And if you leave something out of
your sales pitch, a potential buyer will assume you're leaving 
it out because you're covering or hiding a flaw in your
product or service.

 

Third, show the reader the results he or she will experience
when using your product or service. Show them how fun or
easy or healthy or profitable their future will be due to the
amazing effects of your product or service.

 

Fourth, if your product is very expensive compared to
competitor's products, see if there's a way to get your product
into the hands of potential buyers with a short-term trial. ROM
does this with their 30-day rental. And ROM lets the  renter know,
if they buy after they rent, the full rental price will be used toward 
the purchase, so the rental money doesn't go to waste.

OK, that's my first ad review.

What do you think?

Let me know what you liked and didn't like.

Also, feel free to tell me what you'd like to see me review in this blog.

If you want to check out the ROM, go to the company's website at: www.FastExercise.com

Recently, the ROM company has been running quite a few ads. As I collect them I'll scan them in and post them here so you can see the other strategies and executions they’re using to sell the ROM.

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